Monday 26th May
WORKSHOP
NOTES
MORE STORIES/ SCENES
1.
At Mahroofs place and at the bank performed by Julie, Hala, Hashem,
Mahroof
Mahroof is complaining to his Mum that hes low on cash
"Mum I need money to go to TAFE in Campbelltown
as you know we live
in Bankstown and its far
I need $40". The whole scene is performed
in Arabic from here
.
Mother replies in Arabic - "Where am I
going to get $40 from?
Dad answers - "Are you joking?"
Mother
"What about your Centrelink money?"
Mahroof "Dad
takes all my Centrelink money"
Dad "What are you talking about,
how can you accuse your father of that?"
Mum "Fine, lets
go and see how much money youve got in the bank"
Mahroof
"No, no, thats not a good idea"
Mahroof and his Mum go
to the bank and she puts $20 in his account. She gets a receipt and realizes hes
got plenty of money in his account and drags him home to his father to be dealt
with. His father is disgusted that his son is accusing him of stealing money from
him. They continue to argue.
2.
At Mohammeds house and next door at his best friends place performed
by Ali, Mohammed, Aladdin, Wazza
Its Mohammeds birthday (Aladdin
is playing the role of Mohammed). Mohammed wants to go out with his mates
they are going to the beach, to hang out, pick up chicks and just be boys
you know!. Mohammeds at home and he says to his Dad
"Im
Bored, Im going to Matuses place next door". He goes next door
and the boys convince him to go and talk his Dad into allowing him to go out for
the night. Mohammed returns home and asks, only to receive an immediate NO from
Dad. This is where the argument comes in
. "Why cant I go. Im
good. I look after my sister. Im good at school
. you know who the
boys are. They come from good families". Ali represents the father as saying
things like
"Son, you respect me and I respect you. What do you want
to go tot he beach at 10pm. Why do you lie to me
. why do you hang around
with these boys
who are these boys". After tireless arguing, reasoning,
questioning and comparisons to other good kids, he lets Mohammed go
out but on the provision that
"You get a job and you be good".
3.
At Alis house performed by Ali, Youssef, Elissar, Ahab
Elissar
is on the phone. Her brother and father are smoking the argyla (hubbly bubbly
pipe) and watching Optus Pay TV. Someone knocks at the door. Its the son.
He throws his bag and his mother begins hurling abuse at the father in Arabic
"
teach your son some respect
you dont just come home and throw your
bag in the middle of the lounge room". The daughter comes out because she
hears noise and then they start yelling at her
"go and sweep the floor
go
to your room." The father dismisses her as if she doesnt even exist.
The son wants to take the family car out that night and his father allows him
but his mother is furious because his father says yes. The daughter hears and
comes out of her room and she complains that if her brother gets the car, why
doesnt she. The whole family ends up in a huge argument.
4. At
Izras house performed by Ahab, Ahmad, Doha and Izra
Izras
Mum and Dad are in the kitchen. Their son comes home and sits at the table with
them. Theres a knock at the door minutes later and its their daughter
(Izra). The mother, father and son are bitching about Izra, complaining that she
doesnt behave like a good Arab girl should. Izra enters. After
a screaming match and questions about where shes been etc. they start praising
their son, and why she cant be like him
. "He goes to university
and comes home and respects us
.you hang around Bankstown Square with boys/
girls and do nothing".
They stop arguing and start eating. Out of nowhere
Izras father starts hurling abuse at her and stands up banging the table
in anger. He says
"The Prophet says we hold the fork and eat with our
right hand
.why are you eating with your left". Izra tries to fix her
oversight immediately and swaps hands that she holds the fork with from left to
right. The Dad overreacts and hurls abuse at her saying, "you have no respect,
you are rubbish". A huge debate on religion is started and the whole family
ends up in an argument.
5.
In the car with Elissar and Matuse and at their home performed by Julie,
Matuse and Elissar.
Elissar picks her brother up from school and on the
way home in the car he pulls out a packet of cigarettes. Elissar looses it and
is very angry that her brother has started smoking. She says
"what are
you smoking for
. those things are cancer sticks". Matuse brushes her
off and tells her to mind her own business. "Are you smoking just because
your friends are", she says. "Yeh maybe, so what if I am" ,he says.
The two argue all the way home in the car. At home Elissar walks in and her mother
(Julie) notices that she looks disturbed. She probes her, asking constantly what
is wrong. Elissar tries to avoid talking to her mother but in the end is forced
to tell her that she is angry because Matuse is smoking. Their mother immediately
calls Matuse and they engage in a heated argument. Matuse is swearing and cursing
his sister
"where is the trust between us
what did you tell mum
for you bitch". The scene ends when Matuse walks away from his mother and
sister.
6.
At a petrol station and then on the phone between the homes of Susan and Ahmad
performed by Susan, Ahmad and Wazza
Ahmad is filling up petrol at
the local station and he sees his girl get out of a car. He is shocked
because they were supposed to be together that day and she said she couldnt
leave the house. He approaches her and demands an explanation. She refuses to
speak to him, saying
"I cant talk to you now, call me later".
He uses a little force, grabbing her arm, but she resists stronger and walks away.
Ahmad calls Susan that night and she immediately tells him that she cannot see
him anymore
"We cant see each other, were from different
sects of our religion". Ahmad replies
."but it doesnt matter,
I love you. Were both Muslim and thats what counts isnt it".
The two of them argue and Ahmad will not take no for an answer. He begs and pleads
with Susan not to leave him. Susan is harping on about the difference in religious
sects and how that will affect their relationship. She confirms that its
over and Ahmad gets really angry
he clicks it. She asks if they
can be friends and he yells
. "No way, its either we are together
or we are not, thats it!" Susan ends the conversation with
"have
a nice life".
7.
At home in Anthonys lounge room performed by Anthony, Julie and Susan
Anthony
and his brother Mark are watching television and a program comes on featuring
Yassar Arafat. Mark makes a comment
"As if he gives a crap about anyone
whos not Islamic". Anthony is enraged by this comment and says to him
"How do you know anything about politics, what do you know about Arafat
you
havent met the guy". Mark is offended and they begin a heated debate,
its half politically motivated and half just brothers disagreeing.
They continue to argue and one of them throws a punch. Within minutes, its
a brawl and they are swinging punches left, right and centre. Their father hears
the screaming from another room and comes in and splits the two up
"How
can you hit each other
you are brothers", he says. Anthony and
Mark continue hurling abuse at one another and the father gives them a serious
lecture, sending them both to their rooms.
8.
At Dooas friends house performed by Dooa, Julie and Hala
Julie
goes to her friend Hala for advice. She is worried about making the wrong decision
about being with the guy she has chosen. He threatens to hit her all the time
and she doesnt know what to do. Hala is furious that her friend is feeling
endangered by her boyfriend. She demands that she should leave him immediately.
Julie is defensive and although she is asking for advice, any advice that Hala
gives is thrown back at her by Julie. The two end up in a huge argument because
Julie starts questioning Halas relationship. Hala is enflamed because Julie
was the one with the issue and because Hala told her the truth, Julie couldnt
and wouldnt accept it. It was obvious that the truth hurt and Julie felt
stuck in the relationship or somehow it was a sense of security for her. Hala
was trying to break that comfort zone and she did. Of course Julie didnt
like that and the argument continued.
9.
At Dooas house performed by Ali and Dooa
Dooa calls Ali and
tells him she needs to talk to him about something really serious. She asks him
to come over right away. Ali brushes her off, pretending not to care, saying
.
"what are you pregnant or something
..your always bloody winging
.theres
always something wrong". Ali goes to her house anyway. They sit and talk
and Ali remains non-chalant about the whole idea that Dooa is genuinely disturbed
by something. She gets increasingly angry with him, yelling
. "Why do
you have to behave like such an idiot
I called you up and told you I need
to talk to you about something serious and you just carry on like a fool..not
caring". Ali gets up to walk away, calling her a winger and nagger. Dooa
switches into dominate mode and demands he sits back down. Ali sits and keeps
probing foolishly that if she is pregnant, then she should just come right out
and tell him. Dooa is silent for a while and then says
"so what if I
was, is that how you would react
what if I was pregnant". Ali looks
concerned now and demands that she just come out and say it like it is. Dooa is
furious that he is reacting so irrationally and with no emotion, making the audience
believe that she is actually pregnant. And then, the bomb hits
.she stands
up and announces
"if you really want to know, my dad just died".
Dooa storms out of the house and Ali is left feeling miserable, cursing himself
that he reacted that way. He feels now that he has really hurt Dooa, but its
too late.
10.
Outside Julies workplace performed by Julie and Anthony
Julie
is getting ready to close up shop and finishing her last duties at work. Her boyfriend
is waiting impatiently outside. She is wondering where he is and calls him only
to realize hes outside. He is complaining about waiting for 20 minutes for
her and she is furious that he would be so impatient knowing she is working really
hard
"Ive been on my feet for 14 hrs, busting my ass to make some
money and all you can do is complain about waiting a fucking bit". Her boyfriend
is furious and he walks off
"I dont want to go out with you anymore
youve
ruined the mood". Julie screams out
"yeah walk away
you are
good a that". They meet again a while later at the train station and Julie
says, "how can you leave me like that in the middle of the street
.you
know Im scared to walk by myself at night
how do you expect me to believe
you love me if you just walk off like that all the time". He responds with
more winging about how he cant stand waiting and that she always makes him
wait. The train is about to come and she says
"are you getting on that
train"
.he says, "no
why dont you get in the car with
your brother, hes parked right over there". Julie doesnt care
about how she will get to where she is going. She just wants proof that her boyfriend
will stand by her and unfortunately she is proven wrong. She gets on the train
alone.
11.
At Izras place performed by Hashem and Izra
Izra calls her
boyfriend (Hashem) and asks him to come over immediately. He does, and they sit
staring into each other eyes. Izra breaks the news to him, that they cannot be
together anymore. Hashem is shocked and he asks why. Izra says
"You
know how your Christian and Im Muslim
well my parents just wont
accept that and it will be hard for us to be together". Hashem thought that
they had agreed to drop the religion thing
"it doesnt matter about
religion
whats in my heart is only you and you should put your family
aside". Izra is adamant that she cannot do that and their relationship has
to end. Hashem becomes really upset and angry. He storms out of the room, leaving
her behind.
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